Tuesday, July 2, 2019
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Very good Lily !
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lily,
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure I should say I do like turtles! I like the way you have set the scene with the background. Your animation is very quick and I had to watch it a few times to recognise the shark. You could add a few more slides here and slow it down so we can see it better.
Mrs Krausse
Hello Lily,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Heneliena. I really like your animation a turtle eaten by a shark.I think this is a really good way of telling people to SAVE THE TURTLES! I particularly liked the part when the turtles safely returned to its island.
Hello Heneliena, thank you very much for your awesome feedback! I'm really trying to show that turtles need to be saved. Maybe next time you could give me something to work on as well. :)
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